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Tiever's World Domination - To Be Rewritten

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Many years ago there lived a hidden city made from the finest of ocean layers you could ever see, inside this city lied the race of the dragons. There was much peace in the city where they all lived normal happy lives and eventually began trading with the other villages and towns. Then soon the leader Tiever the original discoverer and owner of this city caused mass  chaos to brew, due to unfit and horrible laws that gave people no rights at all. Eventually rebellions started and gangs/parties formed to stop the terrorizing rule of the horrible demon that ruled the city. It went to the point where the War of The Seas started.

"Rex! REX...REX!!!!!" "What?!?" "Finally you answer me!" "Yea what do you want?" "Go wake up your brother, he has been sleeping in all day!" "Fine." "Hey! Lazy ass get up!"(Man why can't he just leave me alone....)"Hey I said get up! You can stop dreaming about the girl you will never get, and just get up." "Fine..." (Well it looks like I'm just going to have to give up and this one (Sigh)). "Well at least I don't eat my food like someone in the trash." "Oh I'm sorry I couldn't hear you over you snoring." "Ha-ha very funny." At the second out of the war siren went off meaning all pedestrians must evacuate the city as soon as possible, and the cause of this was because of the Tiever's army and the Freedom Pirates Clan. They have been messing with the armies supplies and destroying the properties of the people who support Tiever as a ruler. "Alright then." "Hey ma what's going on?" "Nothing dear ok just get Rex and tell it's time to go." "Ok then if you say so." (This is just another drill probably I really don't see why we have to so many, like I know it's because I'm the son of the ruler and all but still it shouldn't be such a big deal.) Soon out a nowhere a strange ticking was heard and He knew exactly what was going to happen if he didn't run, Tick, Tick, Tick, DING! Boom! The entire wall behind crumpled into tiny pieces and running through the hole were the Freedom Pirates running towards the main room where his father lied. "Teev! Teev! Where are you?" "Rex........Re..x...." As Rex saw him he ran towards as fast as he could in the process a FP saw him and started to shot wildly at him to make sure he wouldn't attack him, and then Rex threw his handmade switchblade going at very fast pace, it soon hit the FP in between his eyes as fell dead to the ground with the blood dripping from the end of the blade. And as for Rex he managed to get to his brother in time before he was burned or crushed alive by the chaos happening around them. Rex held on to his brother as they got in the escape pod and escaped the living that was happening to the Capital Building or the Home in the Hidden City.
Here is the re0make of the orginal one i had on deviart i hope you like it!

If you think i should continue the story then go ahead and say.
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